New poem TIME

Time

A picture is taken
A new memory is made

There are things
That should never
Fade away

Good times
Happy things

And yet some
Things just
Go away

Make the best of
What you got
Spend the time with
Who you love

Take your time
And wait awhile

For the right one
For the right time

In a flash they
Could all be gone

And they slowly
Fade away

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Are They alone

Here's a new poem.

She sits alone
She sleeps alone
She eats alone

She waits for
Him to come
Back home

She lost his
Trust a long
Time ago

Is she alone?
Is she still there?

He wonders
But doesn’t
See if it’s true

But he just sits
Here alone
Thinking of her

She thinking of
Him
Can’t get it out
Of her head

She’s sick of
The lies
He sick of
The fights

They want
To be together
But they’re
Sick of the fights

They don’t want
To argue

What can they
do what can
they say
to not fight

But to stay together

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What Happened

Here's a new poem

I lay awake in my bed
Thinking of you

Thinking about
What happened
That tore us apart

What we could not say
What we couldn’t do

What we did
At that place
At that time

Why there
Why then
Why couldn’t we wait

Why can’t we say
How we feel
Why can’t we be ourselves

What happened to us

I can’t get it
Out of mind

It’s a fairytale
In my mind and
It won’t stop playing

It hurts too much

To say what’s true

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My weekend and SNOW

My weekend was good.

On Friday me, Mack, and my Dad, went to La Crosse we went to Woodman's and to Wal Mart and for dinner we went to Fazoli's. I then on the way to my Mom's I got sick, so instead of staying night at my Dad's, I stay at my Mom's with Jessi. But anyway after
my shower I felt a little better. I think hot cocoa and smoothies don't mix.
Saturday my Dad picked me and Jessi up and we help Mack and my Dad make some scones for a going away party thing. But I didn't really feel like helping so I went with my Uncle and Jessi to the thing and me and Jessi played a card game and talked to some poeple and then they started serve the food. After dinner I played some more games. Then we went back home (to my Dad's) and got ready for bed and wacthed some TV.

Sunday we went to La crosse to go give some stuff to my sister C.J. and then my took us back to Tomah. After that I went out to eat with some friends and I got to play this one game one I forgot what it is called but it was fun. Then I got home and went to bed.

This moring was a very starnage because of the weather.

I Like it snows. I don't know why I just do. Espeacily when it snows at night. I love standing like on a porch and just standing there watching the snow fall. I don't know why I just do.

Anywahy How was your weekend.

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Nothing really

My break was ok not the best but at least I didn't have school.
I really didn't do much. I went to a movie on Monday the 25th, I saw WE ARE MARSHAL. The movie was good. I really don't have much to say but here's a poem that I posted before I think, anyway I re-edited it so here it is.

COLD NOVEMBER

A cold November night
A heart was broken

A life was lost
A dream was
Shatter

The homeland
Was a deadly
Place to go

The memory
Doesn’t’ go away

The pain still
Hurts the same

She can’t go back
She can’t change
The past

Everyday Satan
Tries again to
Bring her down

She heals the wounds
He leaves behind

She waits till
There’s no more pain
She knows it will take a while

But she’ll wait and
Try to make the best

To make her life good

And use the time

How was your break?

HAPPY!!!

Hey some of you know this and others don't, but anyway I got an award for one of my poems. It's the Editor's Choice Award, and I'm so happy. But with most stuff that's good there is a catch. I'm not going to tell you guys anything eles but this, I honestly don't know what it is but I'm sure there is one. Any way the poem is Whispers in the Wind poem. I'll tell you guys more about it later.

Everything is fine
I close my eyes
And I see the things
That I love most

The ocean water and breeze
The summer day

A peaceful night
Tiger cubs sleeping
By me

Not worry about
Things that can happen

Things that might
Happen
Things that scare me

But most of all
I see someone

I can trust
Someone I feel
Safe by

Someone who
Knows the real me
Someone like you

It's been almost a week scince a posted a poem please tell what you think. Thats all I really have to say, right now anyway. Here's a question you guys. How you ever wanted to say something but at the same time you don't want to?

Today

Today well at least not right now I'm not going to a poem.

For the past I've been sick and or tired. I don't think the cold will be going away any time soon and I most likely won't be getting caught up on sleep. So if you notice me sleeping at my desk it's because of what happend last week.
I have been a little more happy then last week becasue one me and "someone" that I have been fighting for a while are now somewhat friends agian. Which is good. I heard some really good news about that I've been wait to hear since summer . Which is also good. I don't know why that's finllay some good in my life. And I still don't have a new poem for you guys.
One bad thing did happen thourgh, which is I have NO PICTURES. That's the olny thing so far.
I have been working on math and my book. But I haven't gotten very far. I finish my history power point.
I'm like so so tired. And the energy drink I've been drinking is not working. It's called MDX. It's like really really good, but it also has some wierd side effects at least for me it dose. Anyway I have nothing important or relevant to say and the stuff I have to say you really don't need to know about it. I have some stuff to some poeple because I would think they will know what I was saying but most of you would probably I no clue what I'm taking about so. That's it for now.
Bye

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I'm back!!!

I'm back and feeling better which is good. Here is a new poem.

There’s nothing to say
Just go away
You are out of my life

I hope that stays the same
I can’t do this again
I can’t pretend anymore

I thought I cared
I can’t let go

The pain won’t go away
There’s nothing to do
There’s nothing to say

The pain is here to stay
Why won’t it go away?
Are the thought here to stay?

Why do I think there’s
A chance for change

Why do I think things?
Can go back to the way there

Were.

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Cold Novermber

A cold November night
A heart was broken

A life was lost
A dream was
Shatter

The homeland
Was a deadly
Place to go

The memory
Doesn’t’ go away

The pain still
Hurts the same

She can’t go back
She can’t change
The past

Everyday satin
Tries again to
Bring her down

She heals the wounds
He leaves behind

She waits till
There’s no more pain

She knows it will take a while

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Work in progress

This weekend we got Sherry’s van cleaned, then Jessi and I got our room complete cleaned, everything put away and organized. For those of you that have seen my room in the past or know me really well you know that is very hard for Jessi and I to keep our room that clean.
I like a little mess but I've realized that it feels much better to have an actual floor. Instead of junk on the floor.
Anyway here is a poem that I came up with over the weekend, it still needs some work but it is fine for right now.

The things that make me happy

The brisk summer breeze
In the morning right after
A good and refreshing rain

When the snow falls
At night, in the dark
Staring sky

The feel of water and sand between
Your toes as it goes past

The feel of the waves
Rushing by you

Smell of fresh air
And the way the
Trees smell in the forest
Or on the country side

The smell of the
Tropical breeze or
The smell of a candle

See people you care about
Laughing and enjoying them self

The feeling of not worry
Or feeling some sort of pain

Seeing the beauty of the
Earth that man has yet to destroy

The feeling of being safe
Of feeling being loved
And having love


The power to express myself
Without being hurt

The hope of having pace
On earth someday

The of waking up refreshed
And not feeling tried
The feeling not knowing
What is going to happen
When I wake up

Those are some of the
Things that make me happy

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the Rain

The soft cold
Rain falls
It hits the ground

I run outside
To see the water
To feel the water

Touch my skin
Playing in the rain
Is really fun

All the cares
All the worries
Fall with the rain

The water and the
Smell of the storm
Fill the air

The water splashes
Around on the ground

As children run and hide
From the water and
They go inside to play games

And to stay dry
I run on wet, cold
Road and embrace
The feeling of the

Cold, wet, ground

It is still a work in progess but please tell me what you think.

Today I'm reposting the poem from yesterday so here it is.

There were things
That went unsaid

There were things
That I cannot forget

There are things I can’t undo
Even if I want to

The mistake I made
I can’t go back
To who I was

The things I never
Told

The people I can’t
Forget them no matter
What they have done

I can’t believe what
I’ve done what
I said

Things that were never
Said haunts me
I want to get things out
But it’s so hard to do

No matter what I do
No matter what I say

I can’t forget about the
Pain that it left behind

I wish I could undo the mess
But I can’t I and have to live
With the mistakes I’ve made

I have learn to live

With them till now

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There were things
That went unsaid

There were things
That I cannot forget

There are things I can’t undo
Even if I want to

The mistake I made
I can’t go back
To who I was

The things I never
Told

The people I can’t
Forget them no matter
What they have done

I can’t believe what
I’ve done what
I said

Things that were never
Said haunts me
I want to get things out
But it’s so hard to do

No matter what I do
No matter what I say

I can’t forget about the
Pain that it left behind

I wish I could undo the mess
But I can’t I and have to live
With the mistakes I’ve made

I have learn to live

With them till now

O.k. I'm looking for ideas. Happy ideas, one because I'm trying to prove a point to Mr. Geiwitz that not all poems are sad, I came up with a few of them but I need some more ideas please help. Two because a block in my mind right now and I'm having a hard time thinking about how to describes the things I'm think of that makes me happy. Mean it's in mind but I can't get it out of my mind and on paper.
So once again I ask if any of you guys of any ideas like what makes you happy. If you want you can email me. My email is rdunn10, you guys should know the rest.

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Nothing is left
Nothing to do

Everything I know
is a lie

The road is long
And sometimes
It feels like there

Are no real friends
anymore

For anyone

It seems like
Everyone
Is pretending

To like people
And everyone seems
To not care anymore

Dose anyone
Care about what
Is real anymore

This is more about what I've seen rather what I feel like.

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snow

Snow freezes the pain
It is soft and it makes me
Feel good

Kids laughing
And playing
Is a wonderful
Sight to see

Every thing
Feels so peaceful
When it snows or rains

Snow is soft and smooth
Wet and cold

It relaxes me
It freezes my pain
It frees my mind

Untouched snow is the
Most beautiful
Think of the
Winter time

Snow will bring
Out the kid in
Anyone


You can have
fun in it
You can throw it
You can roll it


Snow to me is a beautiful
Sight to see

This is how snow makes me feel.
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summer's spell

Why do I feel this way
Why do I even care

Why do I think
Things can change

Why are you
Mad
When you were

The one who was pretending
Why do I think
Things will go to the way they
Were

Don’t want to go back
To the way things
Were

It was a lie
A lie that hurt

I wasn’t pretending
I thought we could
Be friends

I guess I was wrong
I guess you never cared

It was an act
You listen to
The people who
Said that you had
To pretend

To be something your
Not

It hurt me so bad

You don’t care

This poem more personal than you may think, but at the same time it can descibe any friendship not just one of mine almost everybody's friendship with poeple. Every friendship has a rough point and sometimes this is what happens.

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the way I feel

The Devil woke up today
The Devil woke up today

And I tried to
Scare him away

The devil woke up today
And gave me a slap
On the back

I didn’t do the
Right thing I
Let him in
To my head

The devil woke up to today
And I pushed him away

He came back and
I did the same

Then he took my head
And lead me his way

No more
That’s enough
I can’t take it anymore

I freed my hand
And ran away

I don’t want to be
Like that and
I hate the way is feels

I’m not the type
Of person

To do that to people
And still be good

I want to forget
The pain I felt

But I can’t

Get it out of my mind

Everything is falling apart

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What happened to friendship

I have
Never felt
So alone
Before

What happened
To us

What happened
To our friendship

The friendship
Was good until

Someone said the
Wrong thing

What someone did
What someone said

Why can’t things
Stay the same
For awhile

Everyday things
Change
Everyday choices
Are made

Good are bad
You have to
Deal with it

Some changes are good
And some are bad

And sometimes sorry
Helps and
Sometimes it doesn’t


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Dark and cold and pain

Dark and glomming
Sadden and sleepy

Mad and angry
Hurt and upset

Freed by the
Rain and the
Shadow behind me

Windy and cold

Ice and snow
The dark sky
Is what
Saddens me

Running is breathable
But the pains
Get worse as
I forget them

The snow and ice
Covers them

The cold and wind
Freezes them

And the rain
Washes them away



There is so much pain these days not just in my life but also in the world.


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