She’s unstable
You aren’t helping
She needs you
But you aren’t there
She’s on the verge
Of self destruction
So why not help her
Instead of laying around
She needs a friend
Right now
Not someone
Bringing her down
So help her up
And maybe she’ll
Stay here
Instead of running
Around
She’s unstable
Can’t you see that?
She needs your help
You can’t change that
You’re her friend
And she needs you
Now
You aren’t helping
She needs you
But you aren’t there
She’s on the verge
Of self destruction
So why not help her
Instead of laying around
She needs a friend
Right now
Not someone
Bringing her down
So help her up
And maybe she’ll
Stay here
Instead of running
Around
She’s unstable
Can’t you see that?
She needs your help
You can’t change that
You’re her friend
And she needs you
Now
This reminds me of a song, but I'm not sure what song. Anyway I hope you like it, and like my last poem it's not about someone or for someone in particular it’s just some thing that popped into my head.
3 comments:
This is a very good one. You did a really good job on this poem. You are doing really good at writing your poems. I am very proud of you.
Keep up the good job!
I like this one a lot. It calls to me.
Wow this so relates to me. I had a freind, who at first seemed great, really nice, and overall caring. But then I realized how stupid I was for being his friend. He was so mean to mean, and even though I was in some really bad trouble, he just made it worse, and then I finally realized that Its not worth being his friend if he's going to treat me that way, and just bring me farther down then what I was. Great Job.
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