HAPPY!!!

Hey some of you know this and others don't, but anyway I got an award for one of my poems. It's the Editor's Choice Award, and I'm so happy. But with most stuff that's good there is a catch. I'm not going to tell you guys anything eles but this, I honestly don't know what it is but I'm sure there is one. Any way the poem is Whispers in the Wind poem. I'll tell you guys more about it later.

Everything is fine
I close my eyes
And I see the things
That I love most

The ocean water and breeze
The summer day

A peaceful night
Tiger cubs sleeping
By me

Not worry about
Things that can happen

Things that might
Happen
Things that scare me

But most of all
I see someone

I can trust
Someone I feel
Safe by

Someone who
Knows the real me
Someone like you

It's been almost a week scince a posted a poem please tell what you think. Thats all I really have to say, right now anyway. Here's a question you guys. How you ever wanted to say something but at the same time you don't want to?

Today

Today well at least not right now I'm not going to a poem.

For the past I've been sick and or tired. I don't think the cold will be going away any time soon and I most likely won't be getting caught up on sleep. So if you notice me sleeping at my desk it's because of what happend last week.
I have been a little more happy then last week becasue one me and "someone" that I have been fighting for a while are now somewhat friends agian. Which is good. I heard some really good news about that I've been wait to hear since summer . Which is also good. I don't know why that's finllay some good in my life. And I still don't have a new poem for you guys.
One bad thing did happen thourgh, which is I have NO PICTURES. That's the olny thing so far.
I have been working on math and my book. But I haven't gotten very far. I finish my history power point.
I'm like so so tired. And the energy drink I've been drinking is not working. It's called MDX. It's like really really good, but it also has some wierd side effects at least for me it dose. Anyway I have nothing important or relevant to say and the stuff I have to say you really don't need to know about it. I have some stuff to some poeple because I would think they will know what I was saying but most of you would probably I no clue what I'm taking about so. That's it for now.
Bye

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I'm back!!!

I'm back and feeling better which is good. Here is a new poem.

There’s nothing to say
Just go away
You are out of my life

I hope that stays the same
I can’t do this again
I can’t pretend anymore

I thought I cared
I can’t let go

The pain won’t go away
There’s nothing to do
There’s nothing to say

The pain is here to stay
Why won’t it go away?
Are the thought here to stay?

Why do I think there’s
A chance for change

Why do I think things?
Can go back to the way there

Were.

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Cold Novermber

A cold November night
A heart was broken

A life was lost
A dream was
Shatter

The homeland
Was a deadly
Place to go

The memory
Doesn’t’ go away

The pain still
Hurts the same

She can’t go back
She can’t change
The past

Everyday satin
Tries again to
Bring her down

She heals the wounds
He leaves behind

She waits till
There’s no more pain

She knows it will take a while

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Work in progress

This weekend we got Sherry’s van cleaned, then Jessi and I got our room complete cleaned, everything put away and organized. For those of you that have seen my room in the past or know me really well you know that is very hard for Jessi and I to keep our room that clean.
I like a little mess but I've realized that it feels much better to have an actual floor. Instead of junk on the floor.
Anyway here is a poem that I came up with over the weekend, it still needs some work but it is fine for right now.

The things that make me happy

The brisk summer breeze
In the morning right after
A good and refreshing rain

When the snow falls
At night, in the dark
Staring sky

The feel of water and sand between
Your toes as it goes past

The feel of the waves
Rushing by you

Smell of fresh air
And the way the
Trees smell in the forest
Or on the country side

The smell of the
Tropical breeze or
The smell of a candle

See people you care about
Laughing and enjoying them self

The feeling of not worry
Or feeling some sort of pain

Seeing the beauty of the
Earth that man has yet to destroy

The feeling of being safe
Of feeling being loved
And having love


The power to express myself
Without being hurt

The hope of having pace
On earth someday

The of waking up refreshed
And not feeling tried
The feeling not knowing
What is going to happen
When I wake up

Those are some of the
Things that make me happy

How was your weekend? Please leave a comment.

the Rain

The soft cold
Rain falls
It hits the ground

I run outside
To see the water
To feel the water

Touch my skin
Playing in the rain
Is really fun

All the cares
All the worries
Fall with the rain

The water and the
Smell of the storm
Fill the air

The water splashes
Around on the ground

As children run and hide
From the water and
They go inside to play games

And to stay dry
I run on wet, cold
Road and embrace
The feeling of the

Cold, wet, ground

It is still a work in progess but please tell me what you think.

Today I'm reposting the poem from yesterday so here it is.

There were things
That went unsaid

There were things
That I cannot forget

There are things I can’t undo
Even if I want to

The mistake I made
I can’t go back
To who I was

The things I never
Told

The people I can’t
Forget them no matter
What they have done

I can’t believe what
I’ve done what
I said

Things that were never
Said haunts me
I want to get things out
But it’s so hard to do

No matter what I do
No matter what I say

I can’t forget about the
Pain that it left behind

I wish I could undo the mess
But I can’t I and have to live
With the mistakes I’ve made

I have learn to live

With them till now

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There were things
That went unsaid

There were things
That I cannot forget

There are things I can’t undo
Even if I want to

The mistake I made
I can’t go back
To who I was

The things I never
Told

The people I can’t
Forget them no matter
What they have done

I can’t believe what
I’ve done what
I said

Things that were never
Said haunts me
I want to get things out
But it’s so hard to do

No matter what I do
No matter what I say

I can’t forget about the
Pain that it left behind

I wish I could undo the mess
But I can’t I and have to live
With the mistakes I’ve made

I have learn to live

With them till now

O.k. I'm looking for ideas. Happy ideas, one because I'm trying to prove a point to Mr. Geiwitz that not all poems are sad, I came up with a few of them but I need some more ideas please help. Two because a block in my mind right now and I'm having a hard time thinking about how to describes the things I'm think of that makes me happy. Mean it's in mind but I can't get it out of my mind and on paper.
So once again I ask if any of you guys of any ideas like what makes you happy. If you want you can email me. My email is rdunn10, you guys should know the rest.

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Nothing is left
Nothing to do

Everything I know
is a lie

The road is long
And sometimes
It feels like there

Are no real friends
anymore

For anyone

It seems like
Everyone
Is pretending

To like people
And everyone seems
To not care anymore

Dose anyone
Care about what
Is real anymore

This is more about what I've seen rather what I feel like.

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snow

Snow freezes the pain
It is soft and it makes me
Feel good

Kids laughing
And playing
Is a wonderful
Sight to see

Every thing
Feels so peaceful
When it snows or rains

Snow is soft and smooth
Wet and cold

It relaxes me
It freezes my pain
It frees my mind

Untouched snow is the
Most beautiful
Think of the
Winter time

Snow will bring
Out the kid in
Anyone


You can have
fun in it
You can throw it
You can roll it


Snow to me is a beautiful
Sight to see

This is how snow makes me feel.
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summer's spell

Why do I feel this way
Why do I even care

Why do I think
Things can change

Why are you
Mad
When you were

The one who was pretending
Why do I think
Things will go to the way they
Were

Don’t want to go back
To the way things
Were

It was a lie
A lie that hurt

I wasn’t pretending
I thought we could
Be friends

I guess I was wrong
I guess you never cared

It was an act
You listen to
The people who
Said that you had
To pretend

To be something your
Not

It hurt me so bad

You don’t care

This poem more personal than you may think, but at the same time it can descibe any friendship not just one of mine almost everybody's friendship with poeple. Every friendship has a rough point and sometimes this is what happens.

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the way I feel

The Devil woke up today
The Devil woke up today

And I tried to
Scare him away

The devil woke up today
And gave me a slap
On the back

I didn’t do the
Right thing I
Let him in
To my head

The devil woke up to today
And I pushed him away

He came back and
I did the same

Then he took my head
And lead me his way

No more
That’s enough
I can’t take it anymore

I freed my hand
And ran away

I don’t want to be
Like that and
I hate the way is feels

I’m not the type
Of person

To do that to people
And still be good

I want to forget
The pain I felt

But I can’t

Get it out of my mind

Everything is falling apart

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What happened to friendship

I have
Never felt
So alone
Before

What happened
To us

What happened
To our friendship

The friendship
Was good until

Someone said the
Wrong thing

What someone did
What someone said

Why can’t things
Stay the same
For awhile

Everyday things
Change
Everyday choices
Are made

Good are bad
You have to
Deal with it

Some changes are good
And some are bad

And sometimes sorry
Helps and
Sometimes it doesn’t


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Dark and cold and pain

Dark and glomming
Sadden and sleepy

Mad and angry
Hurt and upset

Freed by the
Rain and the
Shadow behind me

Windy and cold

Ice and snow
The dark sky
Is what
Saddens me

Running is breathable
But the pains
Get worse as
I forget them

The snow and ice
Covers them

The cold and wind
Freezes them

And the rain
Washes them away



There is so much pain these days not just in my life but also in the world.


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A rose for you

A rose hangs
On the door
And a number
Saying how long till
He returns

She can’t wait
To hear his voice
She has been waiting
Long enough

Since he left
Five years ago
He was traveling
Across the world

She can’t wait
To move forward
To have a real
Family with him

She gets a letter
From the mystery man
Saying “ I’ve been gone to
Long I hope you haven’t
Moved on.”

A roes hangs there
On the door
Then when
She comes home

It isn’t there anymore
She looks up
As it falls to
The floor

She thinks she sees
Him by the door
But she is not sure
Anymore

Than he takes
Her by the

Hand and says

“You’re the one
Thought of
On those long winter
Nights.” As a tear drops
From her eyes

I’ve missed you for so long
This doesn’t seem real
Then she realizes it’s
As it can be
He’s here to stay forever


Please tell me what you think.

Today's poem

Today's poem is about freindship.

Friend is someone you can trust
Reasonable when it comes to most things
Individual
Entrust that person with secrets
Nobody is like them
During a hard time you can count on them
Someone you can go to
Help you when you need
Important to you
Patient




For the past couple of weeks I haven't been acting much friend to some people because there has been a lot on my mind lately and there are some other reasons but I can't really get into them right now.
I'm sorry for a lot of things, you know sometime I just want to go back in time and change some things. Not like to last year but to at the beinging of the school year to change some things. Oh,well what's do is done and it's time to go forward to what the future holds.
I just had to get this stuff out.



Have a good day and please leave a comment.

Life

One thing that helps me when I feel donw is to write so here is something to think about.

Paints a picture in your mind
Open the mind to new things
Examine your words
Make you think about how to describe people and places
Some feelings can be explain easier

Here is another poem that last weekend.


Back To Before

Glass shatters
As it hits the ground

When she read
The note
On the door

She couldn’t believe
What it said

She started to cry
As she read

It said “ Dear Mom
I had to go I’d be back
Soon and I have some good
News too,
Daddy coming home”


She opens the door
And dropped everything
She had

And started to run
She said, “I’m glad to see
You, how have you been”

Her family was back
To before
Like it was before the war




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Much Better

I'm feeling much better. On Friday I got a letter saying that one of my poems is in the semi-fanils in a contest I enter online and it will be in a book too. THat made me happy.

Here's the poem that will be in a book soon.

In the whispers
Though the wind
In the dark of night

I lay awake
Thinking about
The things you

Told me
If they were true

All the things
I’ve seen
Everything you done

Were they for me?
Or for your
Shellfish needs

Can I believe you
After what you did

Can I trust you?
The same I did

Are you same
Way you were
Before we met

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Today I'm not going to say much either, but I'm going to say this.
I'm really mad right, one of my ex-friends just stabbed me in the back real hard. Have you ever had I friend do that to you?

I know I kind took Shay's idea today about the short post but I'm just really upset right now.

Dark and glomming

Dark and glomming
Sadden and sleepy

Mad and angry
Hurt and upset

Freed by the
Rain and the
Shadow behind me

Windy and cold
Ice and snow

The dark sky
Is what
Saddens me

Running is breathable
But the pains
Get worse as
I forget them

The snow and ice
Covers them

The cold and wind
Freezes them

And the rain

Washes them away

Please tell me what you think.

One chance One change

One chance, one change

If you had one
Chance to change everything

Would you
Take it

One moment
To make things
Right

Would you
Make the
Most of it

If you
Could change
One thing about me

Would you

If you could
One thing
About you

Would you

Change

Please tell me what you think.

No one sees
No one cares
No one knows

Who I am
Everything I
Do everything
I say

No one sees
No one hears

The cry
For help

The pain
I hide

Even when
I Scream
I’m here
No one
Can hear

Invisible to
Everyone
I know or see

No one remembers
Who I am Where I am

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Disappear

Disappear

I need a place
To think
I need a place
To run to

I need to
Disappear

Disappear in
The dark

Disappear
In to the night

Disappear
From me
From you

Disappear
From everything
From everyone

But the fear

In my mind

please tell me what you think

One Thousand

One thousand days
A thousand words
A thousand years

Thousand lives
Thousand people

And one chance
To make things
Right

Thousand voices
In the air
Thousand different
Foods

One thousand
Language became
Just one

A thousand
Years till

Paradise

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Today

I would like you to tell me what your favorite poem is so far...



Please comment

one from the past

Here's a poem that wrote last year. I hope you like it.


Did You


When you said you were going, did you mean forever? And when you said goodbye, did you say it with a tear in your eye? Why are you leaving me like this the moment after we kiss? If I told why, would you feel the same way that I feel inside? Would you care what I think or would you just turn away. Would you feel the same way?
Would you leave forever and stay away?








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Two in one

A Deadly Secret

This holds a deadly secret
Which no one tells

No one knows
No one will tell
No one can see

The pain he left behind
The way she feels

The way the
Friends Feel

The friends are
Spilt into two

They won’t be
The same anymore

Please tell me what you think.

Something new

I'm going to post some of my old posts. Tell what you think. Please.

My soul is cold
No feeling is left

No friends
No one
No will

No fate
No death

Here alone
In a cold world
With death

With hate
With lies
With no real
People inside

A soul of love
A deep secret is hold

That no one
Can know
What I feel inside

This is what some people feel like when there are down and no one is there

Out Of Me

Out of me

No matter
Where I go

No matter
What I do

I can’t
Escape you

First you’re
In my head
Then you’re
In my heart

Now in
My heart
Not in head
Anymore

Get out of
My mind
Get out of
My heart

Get out
Of me
And take
You’re Pain

And leave

Just leave

Please tell me what you think.

The Fight

The Fight

In the dark
In the light

They will
Win the fight

Everything is
At stake
Make no mistake

Everything we do
Everything we say
Everyone will
Be watching

Watching every
Move we make

Every breath
We Take

It’s like we
Are under a
Microscope

Everything I do
Everything I say

People will
Turn it around

Plaese tell me what you think.

The Whisper in the wind

Whispers in the wind

In the whispers
Though the wind
In the dark of night

I lay awake
Thinking about
The things you

Told me
If they were true

All the things
I’ve seen
Everything you done

Were they for me?
Or for your
Shellfish needs

Can believe you
After what you did

Can I trust you?
The same I did

Are you same
Way you were
Before we met

Please tell me what you think

ONE

One Can Change Everything

One time
One chance
One night

One moment
In time

One day
One word
One Way

To make
Everything right

One song
Is all it
Takes for
Everything to
Be gone

One minute
To change your mind

You can lose
Everything
With one look

With one touch
One dream
Can be broken

With just one word

Everything can Change

Please tell me what you think.

The Feelings inside the pian

I can’t forget you
I don’t want to
Remember you

The pain you
Give pain

The feelings
You left me

Don’t you remember?
the pain you
left me

the heartache
the trouble

I can’t stop
Thinking about
The way you
left things

The warm became cold
The beautiful
Became ugly

The water
Became ice
The sweet

Became sour

Please tell me what you think.

The lies you've told me

Why can’t I
See past the
Lies you told me

Why can’t you?
Tell me the truth
I’m hurting inside

The world
Doesn’t care

I need the truth
I want the truth

It’s sets
Me free

From the pain
In my heart

I keep thinking
About what you
Are hiding from me

The pain you’ve
Cause me and the
Troubles it brings

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really long

I don't if I posted this already or not, so here it is.

My family and friends
My life and home
The freedom I have And the protection
The freedom speech And music
The power to live
And to choice to, Live and die
For what you believe in
The freedom of religion
To live for heart
Instead of living against it
For my writings
For the pain of this world
For the art
To work everything
But for nothing
At all but the death, of the heart
And the pride of the world
For my feelings
For everything I
Stand for, For love
For knowledge
Thrusting for more
Everything I know
Everything I’ve learned, Everything I need
Hope I live till the end Hope to live life to the full
With freedom, tests, trails, faith. Friends and family hope and dreams

Please tell me what you think. Iknow it's long.

In the forset

In a forest
In the dark

By the lake
Under the stars
By the fire
In the fall

In a cabin
In the cold

Is where I
Want to be

You and me Alone under the stars

tell me what you think.

one secret

A secret
A broken heart
And one crushed dream

A forbidden love

One secret
Two hearts
Forbidden love

You broke my heart
I broke yours

You crushed my dreams
That night

When we kissed
I got scared And confused

Tell me what you think

Does it need work or is it good.

Good is...

Good is, the Power to live

My family and friends
My life and home

The freedom I have
And the protection

The freedom speech
And music

The power to live
And to choice to
Live and die
For what you believe in
The freedom of religion

To live for heart
Instead of living against it

For my writings
For the pain of this world
For the art

To work everything
But for nothing
At all but my death
And fall


For my feelings
For everything I
Stand for

For love
For knowledge
Thrusting for more

Everything I know
Everything I’ve learned
Everything I need

Hope I live till the end
Hope to live life to the full

With freedom, tests, trails, faith. Friends and family hope and dreams

Tell me what you think.

Freedom

The freedom
Of choice
To speak
To jump
To climb and
To reach for are dreams

The freedom
Of religion
Of faith

To teach
To preach
To learn all we can

The freedom
To have power
To write
To feel
To make a difference

The freedom and
Protection from harm

The freedom
Of faith
Of friends
Of life

The freedom of knowledge
To care, to love, and to have dreams The freedom to live and breathe for ourselves

Tell me what you think.

Tell me what you think

A world of hate

I’m trapped inside
A world of lies

And nothing

I Can do

Nothing I can say
I can’t speak
Can’t show

What is inside?
Of the soul

The rich one
Despises the one
Who is poor?

The lame
Despises the
One that walks

And no one
Can tell the truth
On know will

Every one is
Filled with hate

On one can see
The pain of the
One who is?
In the middle

Tell me what you think.

a sad world

My soul is cold
No feeling is left

No friends
No one
No will

No fate
No death

Here alone
In a cold world
With death

With hate
With lies
With no real
People inside

A soul of love
A deep secret is hold

That no one
Can know
What I feel inside

This is what some people feel like when there are down and no one is there.

Friend

A friend is
Someone that
You can trust

That cares
Someone that would
Tell you the truth

A real friend
Can tell when
You are upset

And would try to
Cheer you up
When you're down

Not some that stabs
You in the back
Or lies to your face

A friend can be
Anyone that you
Meet and that
You talk to

Tell me what you think

BRIGHT

I know the poem is short but tell me what you think.


LOOK FOR THE GOOD

Spring day

Summer night

Cool and breeze

Staring sky

Sunshine bright

A glow of light

In the dark

Rain in a drought

Cold in the desert

Hot in the north

The good in the bad

The color in the gray

The rainbow in the gray sky







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two in one day

Don't have a title

The fear in her eyes
Come alive

In the anger
And hate for
The one who
She despises

The mockers
Of the creator

The bully
The one that
Kills the soul
The Devil himself and
His Demons on earth

Mockers of the creator
The one that saves the soul
The one who brings
Life and joy toThe earth

I wrote this one a couple of days ago when I was a little upset.

Tell me what you think.

his touch

The wind whispers in my ear

I can feel his hand

On my shoulder

I hear a voice

I turn around

Nothing’s there

I hear people talking

No one there

Voices in my head

I can’t stay focus

On this spring

When I think about him

His voice

His touch

The way feel

When he’s around

My heart dying

Inside, waiting to see him

One last time

The wind goes away

The feeling turns cold

The voices disappear

In the air

Everything is done

He is gone forever

I wrote this because I fell this way sometimes when I’m thinking about people I cared for and lost.
tell me what you think.

controlled

Everything disappears
Everything is gone
On one cares

No real friends
Nothing to call mine
And nothing to say

People don’t think
People don’t care
They forgot their

Old friends and

They don’t care
Many don’t care

Don’t think
Don’t worry

About the past
Or the future
What it will

Be like
What people say?
Or act like

Don’t worry
Don’t care

I know
I won’t
Let it
Control me
Let it be

Tell me what you think

What

What
In the spotlight
In the sun
Nothing matters
No one cares

What happens?
What you lose
What you gain
What you’ve done
What you don’t do
What you say

What you mean
When you talk
What you write
What it means

No one cares
What happens to you?
Or me, or themselves
The one that worry
About what people think
tell me what you think

friends that don't care

You know there are so many people who become friends with somebody and they don't what happens to them. It's like if they get new friend the old ones they don't care about them (the "old" friends.) I got a book called TRUST AND BETRAYAL by JANET BODE, and it's true stories about kids who can't get along with their friends. What do you do if some of your so called friends won't talk to you and they think that they know what's really going on you with how could the know when you don't talk to them. Mean it's one thing when the keep you in the loop of everything and have other friends, but it's another when like a year ago or even three months ago you had plan to do stuff together and for no reason at all it's like they're nothing to you.
I’m so sick of the world I’m in because you can hardly trust anyone anymore. I’m sick of people who pretend to along with you and then pretend you’re not even there when you’re right next to them. If people don’t what someone as a friend then they should say some to that person instead of ignoring them. It’s one thing if you’re not friends with them or don’t like them, but if you’re friends with them, talk to them, at least very couple of days. What’s the point of having a friendship with some you don’t talk, or don’t try to talk to them. I think I had better friends when there was a boarder between us then there isn't a boarder. It’s like friends one minute and the next you won’t even say hi, what’s the deal.
That's it for now, please leave a commet, of what you think.

NO one

Here's a poem I just wrote
NO one
No one can see her pain
She hides away
No one can hear her voice
Speaking up in a crowd no one hears

Do they care do they see
Are they pretending not too?
They turn they faces away

She lost and confused
And no one cares
Who she is
Why she’s here

They lock her away
So they don’t have to see
They don’t care what she thinks
What she says
What she does

They don’t care
They don’t see
They don’t hear

The voice that speaks
That no one can hear

No one can feel her pain
The death inside
The soul and heart
Of friends that don’t care
Don’t hear or see

Tell me what you think

something but nothing

Have you ever felt like you could punch something. Well with me it's more like throwing something most of the time it's a baseball or sometimes a football, when I'm stressed out. I could throw a thounsand baseballs in a baseball feild. Nobody knows how much I like throwing stuff even if they say they do they don't not even my family.
You know many say that they know somebody but they don't them at all. How could somebody know somebody else if they don't spend any time together. They may spend time to talk to them every once in a while but they really don't know them. They don't know what the other has been threw or what they feel or think. Nobody knows what something feels like for someone not even if that same thing happened to them because no one is the same and no one will ever be.
No one has the right to judge some one they don't know. They shouldn't because one little judgement can change a preson's life and can ruin everthing along with a rumor.

It’s SPRING

It’s SPRING
You know what that’s means? Spring-cleaning.
On Saturday I mostly cleaned my room and I can actually see the floor, not just some of it but all of it. I cleaned with in seven hours. When I was cleaning, I found a lot of stuff I was missing. Why is it, when you clean something you find stuff that you lost a while ago? Saturday was cleaning day so almost everything got clean.
We almost got a dog too, there was some type of ad for a dog online and we knew the person. We called her said that we would go over there later but around five o’ clock, she called and said that she was going to take the dog to some lessons, and give it another chance. On Sunday, I went to the La Crosse Library and got some CDs. I got a Reba McEntire, Room to Breathe and another CD.

I know it's short but oh well.

Immigration
I'm the fear in eyes of anger and cries
I'm the truth you try to hide the truth
that eats you alive of who you were
and who are today
Discrimination and humiliation
Is what bestow
Discrimination on our
race, speech, and clothes
humiliation you say to the face
you say behind the back
and at a low
you despises the one
who hides away from
the shame and one who tries to play
you just turn them away
don't care what they say
you don't care what they do
you just them hate cause they not like you

MY STUFF

Yesterday was so boring I couldn't foucs on my work. I'm not sure what was on last night but I have a feeling it was boring. I read some last night but than fell asleep. that's all
bye Becca