Wednesday, November 29, 2006

Cold Novermber

A cold November night
A heart was broken

A life was lost
A dream was
Shatter

The homeland
Was a deadly
Place to go

The memory
Doesn’t’ go away

The pain still
Hurts the same

She can’t go back
She can’t change
The past

Everyday satin
Tries again to
Bring her down

She heals the wounds
He leaves behind

She waits till
There’s no more pain
She knows it will take a while
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4 comments:

Tamra Jennell said...

Sounds great cuz, I really cant wait to spend the whole day with you and Jessi and Tara tommrow, I will be like old times, just with Tara, who is a great addition to our memories. I really dont care if we see anything spending time you yall will be enough for me. Love you tons.

Tonya said...

A powerful poem. I like it alot. Sounds like you are getting better and better.
Keep up the good work....

HJK said...

This one is really good. It sounds really heartfelt and honest. Haylee

jessica-- said...

I really like this one. My favorite line has got to be

"She waits till
There’s no more pain
She knows it will take a while".

Thats really good and can relate to a lot of things. I loVE IT.