Monday, November 20, 2006

the Rain

The soft cold
Rain falls
It hits the ground

I run outside
To see the water
To feel the water

Touch my skin
Playing in the rain
Is really fun

All the cares
All the worries
Fall with the rain

The water and the
Smell of the storm
Fill the air

The water splashes
Around on the ground

As children run and hide
From the water and
They go inside to play games

And to stay dry
I run on wet, cold
Road and embrace
The feeling of the

Cold, wet, ground
It is still a work in progess but please tell me what you think.

3 comments:

Deathmask Duplicant said...

I think its a great poem. Keep up the good work.

Tonya said...

Not bad. I really actually like this poem. You did a really GREAT job on this poem!!

Bring some more poems......

Anonymous said...

Deep