Friday, November 10, 2006

summer's spell

Why do I feel this way
Why do I even care

Why do I think
Things can change

Why are you
Mad
When you were

The one who was pretending
Why do I think
Things will go to the way they
Were

Don’t want to go back
To the way things
Were

It was a lie
A lie that hurt

I wasn’t pretending
I thought we could
Be friends

I guess I was wrong
I guess you never cared

It was an act
You listen to
The people who
Said that you had
To pretend

To be something your
Not

It hurt me so bad
You don’t care


This poem more personal than you may think, but at the same time it can descibe any friendship not just one of mine almost everybody's friendship with poeple. Every friendship has a rough point and sometimes this is what happens.

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4 comments:

Tonya said...

Great poem. I really like it alot. This poem you wrote I have been thinking about for the past couple of days now. And I have no clue why? But, you had a great idea of writing this poem.

Good job!!

Tesha D. said...

I really like it. I think this is about friend stuff right? Even if it isn't I still really like it. You always put a lot of feeling in your poems and that's why I like ot read them.

Becca said...

It is about friend stuff.

Anonymous said...

I could have guessed that this poem was about "friend stuff." I find that when people write about things they know and care about, the writing is better, more well thought out and more interesting to read.