Friday, September 29, 2006

Today

I would like you to tell me what your favorite poem is so far...



Please comment

Wednesday, September 27, 2006

one from the past

Here's a poem that wrote last year. I hope you like it.


Did You


When you said you were going, did you mean forever? And when you said goodbye, did you say it with a tear in your eye? Why are you leaving me like this the moment after we kiss? If I told why, would you feel the same way that I feel inside? Would you care what I think or would you just turn away. Would you feel the same way?
Would you leave forever and stay away?









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Tuesday, September 26, 2006

Two in one

A Deadly Secret
This holds a deadly secret
Which no one tells

No one knows
No one will tell
No one can see

The pain he left behind
The way she feels

The way the
Friends Feel

The friends are
Spilt into two

They won’t be
The same anymore
Please tell me what you think.

Something new

I'm going to post some of my old posts. Tell what you think. Please.



My soul is cold
No feeling is left

No friends
No one
No will

No fate
No death

Here alone
In a cold world
With death

With hate
With lies
With no real
People inside

A soul of love
A deep secret is hold

That no one
Can know
What I feel inside

This is what some people feel like when there are down and no one is there

Monday, September 25, 2006

Out Of Me

Out of me
No matter
Where I go

No matter
What I do

I can’t
Escape you

First you’re
In my head
Then you’re
In my heart

Now in
My heart
Not in head
Anymore

Get out of
My mind
Get out of
My heart

Get out
Of me
And take
You’re Pain

And leave
Just leave
Please tell me what you think.

Wednesday, September 20, 2006

The Fight

The Fight
In the dark
In the light

They will
Win the fight

Everything is
At stake
Make no mistake

Everything we do
Everything we say
Everyone will
Be watching

Watching every
Move we make

Every breath
We Take

It’s like we
Are under a
Microscope

Everything I do
Everything I say

People will
Turn it around
Plaese tell me what you think.

Tuesday, September 19, 2006

The Whisper in the wind

Whispers in the wind
In the whispers
Though the wind
In the dark of night

I lay awake
Thinking about
The things you

Told me
If they were true

All the things
I’ve seen
Everything you done

Were they for me?
Or for your
Shellfish needs

Can believe you
After what you did

Can I trust you?
The same I did

Are you same
Way you were
Before we met
Please tell me what you think

Monday, September 18, 2006

ONE

One Can Change Everything
One time
One chance
One night

One moment
In time

One day
One word
One Way

To make
Everything right

One song
Is all it
Takes for
Everything to
Be gone

One minute
To change your mind

You can lose
Everything
With one look

With one touch
One dream
Can be broken
With just one word
Everything can Change
Please tell me what you think.

Friday, September 15, 2006

The Feelings inside the pian

I can’t forget you
I don’t want to
Remember you

The pain you
Give pain

The feelings
You left me

Don’t you remember?
the pain you
left me

the heartache
the trouble

I can’t stop
Thinking about
The way you
left things

The warm became cold
The beautiful
Became ugly

The water
Became ice
The sweet
Became sour
Please tell me what you think.

Thursday, September 14, 2006

The lies you've told me
Why can’t I
See past the
Lies you told me

Why can’t you?
Tell me the truth
I’m hurting inside

The world
Doesn’t care

I need the truth
I want the truth

It’s sets
Me free

From the pain
In my heart

I keep thinking
About what you
Are hiding from me

The pain you’ve
Cause me and the
Troubles it brings

please leave a commet

Tuesday, September 12, 2006

really long

I don't if I posted this already or not, so here it is.

My family and friends
My life and home
The freedom I have And the protection
The freedom speech And music
The power to live
And to choice to, Live and die
For what you believe in
The freedom of religion
To live for heart
Instead of living against it
For my writings
For the pain of this world
For the art
To work everything
But for nothing
At all but the death, of the heart
And the pride of the world
For my feelings
For everything I
Stand for, For love
For knowledge
Thrusting for more
Everything I know
Everything I’ve learned, Everything I need
Hope I live till the end Hope to live life to the full
With freedom, tests, trails, faith.
Friends and family hope and dreams
Please tell me what you think. Iknow it's long.

Monday, September 11, 2006

In the forset

In a forest
In the dark

By the lake
Under the stars
By the fire
In the fall

In a cabin
In the cold

Is where I
Want to be

You and me Alone under the stars
tell me what you think.

Friday, September 08, 2006

one secret

A secret
A broken heart
And one crushed dream

A forbidden love

One secret
Two hearts
Forbidden love

You broke my heart
I broke yours

You crushed my dreams
That night

When we kissed
I got scared And confused
Tell me what you think
Does it need work or is it good.

Thursday, September 07, 2006

Good is...

Good is, the Power to live
My family and friends
My life and home

The freedom I have
And the protection

The freedom speech
And music

The power to live
And to choice to
Live and die
For what you believe in
The freedom of religion

To live for heart
Instead of living against it

For my writings
For the pain of this world
For the art

To work everything
But for nothing
At all but my death
And fall


For my feelings
For everything I
Stand for

For love
For knowledge
Thrusting for more

Everything I know
Everything I’ve learned
Everything I need

Hope I live till the end
Hope to live life to the full

With freedom, tests, trails, faith. Friends and family hope and dreams
Tell me what you think.

Wednesday, September 06, 2006

Freedom

The freedom
Of choice
To speak
To jump
To climb and
To reach for are dreams

The freedom
Of religion
Of faith

To teach
To preach
To learn all we can

The freedom
To have power
To write
To feel
To make a difference

The freedom and
Protection from harm

The freedom
Of faith
Of friends
Of life

The freedom of knowledge
To care, to love, and to have dreams The freedom to live and breathe for ourselves
Tell me what you think.