Friday, September 15, 2006

The Feelings inside the pian

I can’t forget you
I don’t want to
Remember you

The pain you
Give pain

The feelings
You left me

Don’t you remember?
the pain you
left me

the heartache
the trouble

I can’t stop
Thinking about
The way you
left things

The warm became cold
The beautiful
Became ugly

The water
Became ice
The sweet
Became sour
Please tell me what you think.

4 comments:

Tonya said...

Very good Becca. I like this poem alot. Keep up the good work!

Ali(solation) said...

I like this poem a lot too. keep up the good work.

Unknown said...

Ouch, i felt like that a few times. Great poem

Tamra Jennell said...

Wow cuz very good. It is cerntly very true.