A secret
A broken heart
And one crushed dream
A forbidden love
One secret
Two hearts
Forbidden love
You broke my heart
I broke yours
You crushed my dreams
That night
When we kissed
I got scared And confused
A broken heart
And one crushed dream
A forbidden love
One secret
Two hearts
Forbidden love
You broke my heart
I broke yours
You crushed my dreams
That night
When we kissed
I got scared And confused
Tell me what you think
Does it need work or is it good.
4 comments:
Really good Becca. It could use a little more but it's good just the way it is also. You write how ever you feel. It shouldn't matter what we say. As long as you think your poems are good. That is all that matters....
See ya
I think it is really good. I love it how you kept repeating the same style in every verse. byebye
jessica
I like this one... but the ending needs to be stronger (but that's just my opion). I love reading your poems, Keep it up!
I like this one like all of the others.
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