Wednesday, March 29, 2006

What

What
In the spotlight
In the sun
Nothing matters
No one cares

What happens?
What you lose
What you gain
What you’ve done
What you don’t do
What you say

What you mean
When you talk
What you write
What it means

No one cares
What happens to you?
Or me, or themselves
The one that worry

About what people think
tell me what you think

3 comments:

jaydee said...

That was a pretty good poem.

MHanson said...

You did a nice job on the revising of that poem. It flows better now and provides better imagery. Good work.

jessica-- said...

I like it, it makes me want to keep reading. It's really creative. Good job :D