Friday, April 07, 2006

controlled

Everything disappears
Everything is gone
On one cares
No real friends
Nothing to call mine
And nothing to say
People don’t think
People don’t care
They forgot their
Old friends and
They don’t care
Many don’t care
Don’t think
Don’t worry
About the past
Or the future
What it will
Be like
What people say?
Or act like
Don’t worry
Don’t care
I know
I won’t
Let it
Control me
Let it be
Tell me what you think

6 comments:

Tesha D. said...

I really like it. It shows a lot of emotion. I always like reading your blog. Buh Bye now! :)

Ms. Smith said...

I like it.

Since you have a good sense of humor, could you to write something happy and fun.

Please?

Becca, ALWAYS check for errors.

Ali(solation) said...

Very cool. I like it a lot.

Tonya said...

I like it. But, yes check for errors. So, you could do what I do. I write my poem in microsoft word so I spell everything right. Just think of that! But, other than that I love your poem. You did a very good job.

jaydee said...

I like your poem. You did a great job!!!

Deathmask Duplicant said...

I give this Poem 12 outta 10, Its an awesome poem. Keep up the good work