Friday, February 29, 2008

Untouchable Beauty

You hear the guys talk
About her all the time

Everyone wants her
They’re too afraid too
Let her know

No one can seem to
Get her attention

Guys may want to say
Something but
They bit their lip
Instead

She wants the attention
But not from everyone

She’s untouchable
Unattainable
But she feels unwanted

No one tells her
Cause they think
She knows
So what do you think?
Anything new with you?

4 comments:

jaydee said...

I thinks it's good.

Ali(solation) said...

Like I said before...I LOVE IT!

(akw)Stretch said...

I would have to agree. This is really great.

Nope nothing new here. Well I am going to be on the track team sort of. I will work out with them but not compete.

Jess said...

Wow, this poem, is great, it really shows great feelings thats goign on between the girl and the ones who like her. Great Job Becca