Thursday, March 13, 2008

bridges

I’m on a bridge
And I can’t seem
To stay of

I get off
And then I’m
Forced back on

I try to burn it down
But it keeps coming
Back

It breaks my heart more
And more cause I can’t
Seem to fix it

The bridge has many
Thing on it
That means so much

But for me it brings
Sadness and pain

All of the
Objects seem to be
Broken

It reappears
And reopens
And deepens the
Cuts it made before




I'm not sure if all of it fits together. What do you think?

3 comments:

The Chibi guy said...

awesome!!!

jaydee said...

I think it fix together pretty well. Good Job.

Jess said...

This reminds me of the blog that I wrote before about everything thats happened, and it does remind me of this poem, I can't escape those things that have happened. You may be stuck on a bridge, but continue to say happy Becca because then you can later escape or let go of the bridge. Yes the death of Andy and my grandpa, but in a few years it'll get better. It just takes time. Keep on Smiling. You can pass through this bridge.