Here's a new poem
I lay awake in my bed
Thinking of you
Thinking about
What happened
That tore us apart
What we could not say
What we couldn’t do
What we did
At that place
At that time
Why there
Why then
Why couldn’t we wait
Why can’t we say
How we feel
Why can’t we be ourselves
What happened to us
I can’t get it
Out of mind
It’s a fairytale
In my mind and
It won’t stop playing
It hurts too much
Thinking of you
Thinking about
What happened
That tore us apart
What we could not say
What we couldn’t do
What we did
At that place
At that time
Why there
Why then
Why couldn’t we wait
Why can’t we say
How we feel
Why can’t we be ourselves
What happened to us
I can’t get it
Out of mind
It’s a fairytale
In my mind and
It won’t stop playing
It hurts too much
To say what’s true
Please tell me what you think.
2 comments:
Becca,
I like this poem a lot. What you wrote is what I have been thinking about. I am not with my Josh anymore, and all I could think about is what you said.
Keep up your excellent work....
Wow! This poem is great! Tell you the truth it relates to what I've been wanting to say, but you have the talent of actually getting it out of your mind and onto paper. Keep writing!
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