Tuesday, January 30, 2007

New poem TIME

Time
A picture is taken
A new memory is made

There are things
That should never
Fade away

Good times
Happy things

And yet some
Things just
Go away

Make the best of
What you got
Spend the time with
Who you love

Take your time
And wait awhile

For the right one
For the right time

In a flash they
Could all be gone

And they slowly
Fade away
Please leave a comment.

3 comments:

Ali(solation) said...

I love that poem literally that is the best you have ever written. It makes me want to go hug everyone. It makes me feel special, not ed. Keep writing really great poems. You should enter like a poetry contest with this one or something, it is better then excellent.

(akw)Stretch said...

I would have to agree with Alison. That is a really good poem. I would tell you to enter it in the contest but, you have to wait 6 months to enter another poem. That is if you want it in a book.

jessica-- said...

I love this one, its like happy and sad at the same time. Its awesome.