Thursday, February 01, 2007

Here's a new poem I just got done writing. Please Tell me what you think.

Is it so obvious
That everyone knows
Everyone can see

But you have
No idea

Is it so obvious
How I feel about
You

Do you feel
The same way

I can’t hide it
Anymore

I can’t ignore it
Like I did before

So many mix feelings
I don’t know what to do

Or say
but this

do you feel
the same way
I do

Do you know
Know I exist
Are you just a dream

Are you for real
Do you know
The real me

Is there more
To you then
I can see
Please leave a comment.

3 comments:

Tonya said...

Ummm....I like this poem a lot. Just don't know if I should ask what this is about? I can tell from the poem but, yeah. I like the poem a lot. You are doing good at writing your poetry.

Keep up the good work....

Anonymous said...

The poem didn't make any sence to me, but than again no poem ever makes sence to me. That's why I normally don't read poems. But anyways keep up the good work.

Ali(solation) said...

Oh my god that poem is the way I feel right now. Weird. Anyway I love it keep the poems coming because they get to me.