Friday, February 09, 2007

write it ourselves

Here's a new poem .
I’ve read this
Book before
And I didn’t like it

Why can’t we
Re-write it
The way we want

We’ll change
The ending

We’ll change
The plot

Let’s write about
Our life

We’ll make it the
Way we want

We’ll make it real
We’ll write it together

About the past
About the future
About us

Do we have to stick
To the same old thing

Can’t we mix it up
It doesn’t have to be
A fairytale

Why can’t we just write
About real life

Can’t we write our
Own story
Please leave a comment.

3 comments:

(akw)Stretch said...

That is a really good poem.

Ali(solation) said...

That is really cool. I like you you made it like a life story problem not a feelings poem that is very cool.

Tesha D. said...

I agree with ali and akw-bbstar. Your poems keep getting better and better!