Friday, February 02, 2007

Here's another new one.

Fall apart
All together
I’m still a mess

Can’t get it
Straight
Can’t figure out

What’s going on?

With me
With you
With us

With the world
Am I all alone

Is there someone
Out there
That know the real me

Can I trust
Anyone out there

Will someone listen
Does anyone care

Mix emotions hit
The floor and
Open up

And come on out
Unexpected

Another girl is lost
In this world

And can’t find
A way out

And no on
Seems to care
What’s going on
Is anyone out there

Please tell what you think.

4 comments:

Ali(solation) said...

I am out there.

Ms. Smith said...

I think we are all out there.

Anonymous said...

Hmmmmmm? Fall apart all together I'm still a mess, reminds me of Gears Of War.

Tonya said...

I would have to say a very POWERFUL poem.