My best friend
We used to know each
Like family
We used to hang out
With each other
Then we grew up
Grew apart
My best was someone
I could count on
Someone I could trust
Someone I knew
Now all we do is fight
We don’t knew each anymore
We all have secrets
We all give up sometimes
My best friend
Used to be there for me
Someone that I could
Tell secrets to
Someone I knew
My best friend
Is now a stranger
Someone I don’t
Know at all
Someone I can’t trust
Someone who doesn’t know
me
We used to know each
Like family
We used to hang out
With each other
Then we grew up
Grew apart
My best was someone
I could count on
Someone I could trust
Someone I knew
Now all we do is fight
We don’t knew each anymore
We all have secrets
We all give up sometimes
My best friend
Used to be there for me
Someone that I could
Tell secrets to
Someone I knew
My best friend
Is now a stranger
Someone I don’t
Know at all
Someone I can’t trust
Someone who doesn’t know
me
2 comments:
This is good poem. But I odn't think it strikes that much interest. It has a messsage but it is spread kind of in a boring way. I thnk you can do a little bit better. Actually I know you can. Keep up the good work and don't slack. Im not trying to be mean that's just my opinion. Other wise I think the message is great.
That is really good. Some times I feel the same way with a lot of my friends. It is sad that things like that happen.
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