Thursday, November 01, 2007

Not sure

I'm not sure if any of you will like this but here is a new poem but with a old feeling.


I’m not sure who I am
Or who I want to be

Do I want to be like everyone else?
Do I want my own path?

Follow the crowd that I don’t fit in with
Doing my own thing all alone

Having friends who treat me like dirt
Having friends who don’t know me

I try to get close to someone who
Hate my guts

Having friends that tell everyone else
Everything

Having friends that don’t care
Don’t talk to me

I don’t fit there
I don’t fit here

Why do I try to be someone I’m not?
Why do I want to be friends with the enemy?

Why do I try so hard to fit in with people
Who hate me

Why do I try so hard to be away from you?
When you are the only one who really knows me

Why do I always want you to leave?
When I really want you to stay
So what do you think?
Yay I konw it's kinda like all the other but I'm having trouble writing anything else.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like it alot. You really hit the spot on this one. You pretty much hit the main point for this poem. What you wrote actually fits with alot of people. Not just one person but everyone.

Ali(solation) said...

I like it a lot too. It took me a while to understand it though. You might want to watch your spelling mistakes sometimes it doesn't make sence what you write because of the things that are messed up. I'm just saying it might help...but I do really like the poem.

(akw)Stretch said...

That is really good.


I like how I got your attention just about 3 minutes ago from this comment. LOL!!!